Love long distance
by mike marcellino
Long distance love.
Love, long distance,
far as the brightest moon,
fulfilling
empty blue black skies,
the star next door, Jupiter,
afterglow
afterthought
light in the wilderness.
Long distance love.
Love long distance.
Copyright by mike marcellino Long distance love 2009
Notebook Writer: poetry, music, photography and writing of Mike Marcellino
after reading your poem, I was torn between happiness and utter depair. It was somewhere caught in the middle of a Hallmark card and a racist rant. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!!!
ReplyDeleteLOve, not mike.
gee, i don't know what to say, would it be ok, if i left the moon out? or is Jupiter the problem? or is it love?
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Reading your work not only opened a box of ugly memories, but a certain sense of horror.
ReplyDeleteYou should be stopped.
Sincerely, Bob.
Reading your work not only opened a box of ugly memories, but a certain sense of horror.
ReplyDeleteYou should be stopped.
Sincerely, Bob.
i'm speechless
ReplyDeleteI read your poem from heaven, and I loved it!!!
ReplyDeleteKeep it up! M. Jackson.
Nice poem! Love..Love..Love..What can I say?! I feel in love with your poem. Interesting!
ReplyDeleteWell shucks Human Resources, needless to say i'm rather in love with you comment
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