tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4135840517827417463.post4293393264302808950..comments2023-09-24T04:00:59.106-04:00Comments on Notebook Writer: Bit of brown paper, a poemAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05703474389765003524noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4135840517827417463.post-24476401134565948382009-08-30T12:19:16.970-04:002009-08-30T12:19:16.970-04:00hi thought i had resonded but not sure, thanks so ...hi thought i had resonded but not sure, thanks so much for your insighful comments - mike<br /><br />if you like listen to my Americana poetry music songs as Split Pea/ce at www.myspace.com/splitpeaceAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05703474389765003524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4135840517827417463.post-10032242275260059812009-08-16T22:18:33.364-04:002009-08-16T22:18:33.364-04:00Sorry, I misread duex as the poem titleSorry, I misread duex as the poem titleMike Finley ~ Big Vanillahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09944010073428661081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4135840517827417463.post-63028245772876331092009-08-16T22:09:17.157-04:002009-08-16T22:09:17.157-04:00Incantory, nutty, obsessive, sad ... reminds me of...Incantory, nutty, obsessive, sad ... reminds me of horror stories by Lorca in the 30s.<br /><br />Is duex intentional? I think I would like a more straightforward title -- by being clever here you are mis-advertising the confused solemnity of the poem.<br /><br />And at one point say is spelled day.<br /><br />Good, interesting work!Mike Finley ~ Big Vanillahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09944010073428661081noreply@blogger.com